NK2/2010
Writing 1
Essay about my hometown
Publish in the blog ( process 2)
My Hometown
Hi, I am Ranti. I want to tell you about my hometown, Pesisir Selatan, West Sumatera, Indonesia. Its capital is Painan.
It is far enough from padang. We can go there by public transportation that available from 6.00 a.m until 9.00 p.m. It is about 150 kilometers or five hours from Padang. The north of Pesisir Selatan is bordered by the city of Padang, the east by District of Solok and Jambi province, south by Bengkulu province, and the west by the Indonesian ocean.
Before the formation of the province of West Sumatera, Pesisir Selatan is part of The District of Pesisir Selatan and Kerinci period of Central Sumatera. Now, Pesisir Selatan become one district and Kerinci become one province, too.
The weather of Pesisir Selatan is hot but not too hot. In the morning and at night it is cold and at noon it is hot enough. At noon the temperature is about 23 to 32 degree Celsius and at night about 22 to 28 degree Celsius (based on Wikipedia).
Most of the Pesisir Selatan population depend on agriculture crops, fisheries and trade. The other potential power sources are the plantation and tourism. Plantation sector, especially oil palm plantation, has begun to grow rapidly since the last ten years which is located in District Pancung Soal, Basa Ampek Balai, and Lunang Silaut that involving several national investors.
Pesisir Selatan has beautiful natural panorama and fascinating. The nature is still clean and green because there is less factory and less vehicles so that the air is less pollution. Besides, Pesisir Selatan is famous by its beach. The beaches have beautiful under water marine life, clear, and white sand. We can run on the beach without sandals because it is clean and safety. There is no pollution in the sea so that we can do swimming and surfing.
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Pesisir Selatan is also known by its food, Rendang Lokan. There are many seashells (lokan) at Muara Indrapura with a depth about 16 meters. When taking seashells, divers do not use the tool at all.
Pesisir Selatan is the most beautiful place that I have ever seen. I will always miss my hometown wherever I am. Please come and visit my lovely hometown.
5 komentar:
ranti,,
i really confused where i should make a comment,,
because so many writing in your blog,,
i think this is your assignment, so i will make a comment here,,
your essay is good enough,,
but it better to you to give more information about traditional food in your hometown,,
mmm yummyyy
hahah
That's from me,,
:)
You should adds more information about your hometown,Ranti...
Especially the beaches,you should add more information about the beach that can be specific different point with others beaches in our friend's hometown that has beaches too.
Overall,so far so good..
I like your essay, girl. I am interested by your descripition about your hometown. Your essay has made me want to visit your hometown. I really want to go to your hometown...!! You should invite me to go to your hometown. According to me, You have to give a last touch to your essay, it will be more interesting.
I really want to go there, Pesisir Selatan...!!! ^_^
Your essay is good enough. I can imagine well about your hometown, Pesisir Selatan. But your essay still general, not specific yet. Maybe you can add other good places that available in your hometown. By the way, I want to go to your hometown.
I like your essay, but there is little mistake in grammatical.
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